http://inaudible-d.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] inaudible-d.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] arashi_exchange 2016-09-13 05:18 pm (UTC)

Oh my god. The rawness of emotion in this fic hit me. This is so good, I love the flow of the story; how Jun's emotion unfold until he finds the answer for his question. I love how you built Jun's feelings for Sho, from the obvious attraction to the insecurity of Sho might not want him as he is to when it's finally answered. It's great.

I hope Ohno will get what he deserves too, though. It seems like Jun has done a horrible thing to him. I'm not seeing it because this story is in Jun's POV, but that part where Ohno said that he loved Jun broke my heart.

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