I love, love, love that Nino's mother had been working for Masaki and left because Nino was important. That was such a sweet touch!
The idea of this noble guy landing in Nino's lap basically is so fun. I think you captured the spirit of Kizoku Tantei really well even without a big mystery to solve. You got that fake death in there (and oh boy did I feel bad for Nino that this person he cares about he thought was dead D:) as well as the badass servants. I like especially that you explained that they each had freedom and a choice to work for Masaki, they weren't prisoners of the household or something lol
Nino's mom becoming Masaki's mom through marriage - yes! A big happy family is a great ending. ♥
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Date: 2017-09-10 09:29 pm (UTC)The idea of this noble guy landing in Nino's lap basically is so fun. I think you captured the spirit of Kizoku Tantei really well even without a big mystery to solve. You got that fake death in there (and oh boy did I feel bad for Nino that this person he cares about he thought was dead D:) as well as the badass servants. I like especially that you explained that they each had freedom and a choice to work for Masaki, they weren't prisoners of the household or something lol
Nino's mom becoming Masaki's mom through marriage - yes! A big happy family is a great ending. ♥