I really love how you've established Ohno and Nino's domestic life throughout this fic and how things both changed when necessary - new work schedules, etc. - but also stayed the same in terms of affection and support and love. I thought the two of them were so charming in the way they pushed each other to go for their dreams, even if it meant some risk. I also really enjoyed that even though they had some similar skill sets in cooking/baking, they didn't try and work together. They had their own passions and needs.

It was nice to read about a couple adapting to new scenarios, it may seem simple but I think it's hard to write from that perspective and not add unnecessary drama. You did a great job! Thanks for a warm, wonderful fic :)