Oh Sho... Oh dear. I like the development in this part; how Jun finds himself cooking in Sho's kitchen, how it is Sho who tops this time (honestly, I do prefer it like that, though equality definitely is a huge plus).
I'd like to praise you for also having Jun wanting to take things slow. Jun and Sho are known to be the rational ones in the group, and thus, I cannot imagine them being the kind of people to rush into a relationship. I also would not put it past Jun to be the really overthinking type, so I think it fits really well.
THAT SCENE in the kitchen. After their dinner.. I am such a sucker for domestic kitchen scenes and when you then choose to top it off with Sho fucking Jun against the counter, you have me VERY happy. That was very hot.
I like the aspect of Sho being cunning enough to talk his way out of Jun's suspicions, and maybe his unwillingness to make Jun even more suspicious has him letting Jun into his apartment.. In the end, that might've been quite a stupid choice, giving what Jun now finds ..
Thank you again for this interesting story, and sorry for me reading this in quite a slow pace, I hope you don't mind too much :3
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Date: 2016-09-08 11:57 pm (UTC)I like the development in this part; how Jun finds himself cooking in Sho's kitchen, how it is Sho who tops this time (honestly, I do prefer it like that, though equality definitely is a huge plus).
I'd like to praise you for also having Jun wanting to take things slow. Jun and Sho are known to be the rational ones in the group, and thus, I cannot imagine them being the kind of people to rush into a relationship. I also would not put it past Jun to be the really overthinking type, so I think it fits really well.
THAT SCENE in the kitchen. After their dinner.. I am such a sucker for domestic kitchen scenes and when you then choose to top it off with Sho fucking Jun against the counter, you have me VERY happy. That was very hot.
I like the aspect of Sho being cunning enough to talk his way out of Jun's suspicions, and maybe his unwillingness to make Jun even more suspicious has him letting Jun into his apartment.. In the end, that might've been quite a stupid choice, giving what Jun now finds ..
Thank you again for this interesting story, and sorry for me reading this in quite a slow pace, I hope you don't mind too much :3