I was so overwhelmed when I read this comment. Honestly....! <3
I never knew that I would achieve this. This kind of plot is way way way off my list but it's a plot that's been hidden in my head ever since. I am happy that you liked it! I had wanted Jun and Ohno to represent two sides of love and I'm glad that somehow, the characterizations were consistent.
And it also makes me glad that the flow was good for you and that I was able to put across "why" Aiba did this, why Jun did that. I tried to do my best to explain why each character does this or that. If it's logical, or if it's possible for a person to actually think like that and end up making wrong decisions.
Right, there was supposed to be a sex scene in the second part when I was formulating the plot in my head but it bugged me because I thought Ohno represents something like devotion and love that an angry sex won't work and may even look like rape if pursued. So, it was just an "almost" scene. ;)
Sorry I got carried away explaining. But thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I know this kind of story is not always a favorite because everyone hates cheating but I'm relieved to have written this. :)
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Date: 2016-09-21 03:21 am (UTC)I never knew that I would achieve this. This kind of plot is way way way off my list but it's a plot that's been hidden in my head ever since. I am happy that you liked it! I had wanted Jun and Ohno to represent two sides of love and I'm glad that somehow, the characterizations were consistent.
And it also makes me glad that the flow was good for you and that I was able to put across "why" Aiba did this, why Jun did that. I tried to do my best to explain why each character does this or that. If it's logical, or if it's possible for a person to actually think like that and end up making wrong decisions.
Right, there was supposed to be a sex scene in the second part when I was formulating the plot in my head but it bugged me because I thought Ohno represents something like devotion and love that an angry sex won't work and may even look like rape if pursued. So, it was just an "almost" scene. ;)
Sorry I got carried away explaining. But thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I know this kind of story is not always a favorite because everyone hates cheating but I'm relieved to have written this. :)
Love wins. :)