Date: 2016-09-12 06:35 pm (UTC)
WOAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Anon-san! You surely made my day with this awesome beautiful and emotional fic. Read it twice already, and it still has the same impact.
First, they dance. DANCE! One of my alltime favorite AU settings came to life! I really really appreciate that. So, thank you, anon-san!
And Sho as a choreographer (pardon me: the choreographer from hell) But I had a feeling that he saw something really special in Jun and that he went so hard on him that it would appear. (and he loves Jun's dancing. We know that now XD)

"If this is what it's going to do to your dancing, then I'd rather you forget about it."
GEEEEZ, Sho! How can you say that!?
Poor Jun. (Oh, and on another note - sorry for this incoherent comment - I felt his doubts were so real. Sho always seemed to mention his dancing only. So, is it just about the dancing?)

When Jun collapsed and woke up, and Ohno was there (and things had gone obviously wrong within their relationship as Ohno withdrew... and found Nino. I'm happy you made Ohno happy too *throwsyoutonsofsparkles*) and Sho came running. In panic. It was such a beautiful scene. I liked how Jun wasn't quite ready to face him yet, and Sho suddenly invited him to go to Aiba's party :D (and Aiba is married to a trombone player. Yes XD)

The dancing! There was tension in the air for sure! I think it was the turning point for them, wasn't it? Jun danced so freely, and didn't mind anything and anyone, and Sho of course couldn't let his fingers off him. (Oh, and did I mention I'm happy that Ohno's one-sided feelings faded too, and he found a new love. The talk in the café was heart-clenching though. I'm glad they will continue being friends)

I really enjoy the small details Jun suddenly sees. Like Sho folds his clothes although they had sex. And how he doesn't need him to be perfect. Jun wanted Sakurai Sho. He wanted him to tell him how much he loved his dancing. He wanted him to fold his clothes after they'd had sex. He wanted him to be in his bed when he woke up in the morning. Sho wasn't perfect. He had never been perfect. But he was perfect with Jun.
This so much OO

Jun's nervousness before the first representation. Awwwww. And of course Sho is there to comfort him. And Jun finally confesses - so blunt it's awesome. And it's not only about the dancing. Of course (Now Jun knows it too!)

Thanks so so so so so so much, anon-san, for this brilliant fic! I bookmarked it and will definitely come back to read it more often!!
THANK YOU! *squeals*
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