Anon-san, let me tell you the ways I love this story (in a very disorganized manner)
The Ohmiya familiarity and domesticity that you established immediately at the start of the story is truly sweet. With how Ohmiya is in real life, there are times when fics based on them tend to become suffocating. Your story isn't and it's beautiful.
I liked the flashbacks beginning from (Nino's) infancy, up until they went to college. Those important little moments in their lives which cemented their relationship into what it is the NOW of the story.
I loved that their life as a couple is not perfect. I love the realistic daily struggles of two working people, balancing career and life and partner.
And I love the food! I love food! And I wanna taste the food Nino cooked for Ohno and the cakes and breads and pastries that Ohno baked for Nino.
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Date: 2017-09-11 11:40 am (UTC)The Ohmiya familiarity and domesticity that you established immediately at the start of the story is truly sweet. With how Ohmiya is in real life, there are times when fics based on them tend to become suffocating. Your story isn't and it's beautiful.
I liked the flashbacks beginning from (Nino's) infancy, up until they went to college. Those important little moments in their lives which cemented their relationship into what it is the NOW of the story.
I loved that their life as a couple is not perfect. I love the realistic daily struggles of two working people, balancing career and life and partner.
And I love the food! I love food! And I wanna taste the food Nino cooked for Ohno and the cakes and breads and pastries that Ohno baked for Nino.
Thank you anon-san.