I love how you established this world with a reasonable amount of words, painting what kind of Elven forest they are in, the different clans, and the story itself. It's just the right amount of action, of fluff, and of romance.
Of course, Juntoshi! Ohno is such a wise king but it's so cute to read about his confusion and slowly developing feelings of love towards Jun. The build-up of the story to that part where there's a traitor is great that I was so excited to read all of it! I will be very curious about how Jun's and Ohno's exploration will go. :D
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Date: 2017-09-15 12:25 am (UTC)I love how you established this world with a reasonable amount of words, painting what kind of Elven forest they are in, the different clans, and the story itself. It's just the right amount of action, of fluff, and of romance.
Of course, Juntoshi! Ohno is such a wise king but it's so cute to read about his confusion and slowly developing feelings of love towards Jun. The build-up of the story to that part where there's a traitor is great that I was so excited to read all of it! I will be very curious about how Jun's and Ohno's exploration will go. :D
Thanks for writing this!